Beatitude Blues

KnightofBuddha

Here's a little fun poem I wrote a while back for my guitar. I'm starting to write new poetry for the first time in almost 2 years and this was from a few months ago.

Religion, I got the blues
Sprituality, ain't got a clue
Am I a Buddhist or Jew?
Stuck in Primodial Stew

In Alla or Zeus?
An omnipotent gooes?
So throw me in hell
Cause religion don't sell

Beatitude Blues
You talk but don't wear the shoes
Now I'll tell you the truth
And I'll do it with cooth
See with faith I'm confused
And even amused

See I'm missing the points
Smoked too many joints?
Devil got you?
He just ain't true
The answers are here
There's nothing to fear
If you want to see clear
Just look in the mirror

Crappy, I know. I've got much better ones I'm working on though!:rocker:

colleen

hey sweetheart..

i think this can be done.

my sons friend from switzerland recorded a song she wrote the music
for and he wrote the words.. she then sent it to him ( somehow ) you
kids are better equiped than me in knowing how.
and he put it on a cd!
it was awesome..

your words are great here.. but when you are ready and when you
find something you are comfortable with..
would you somehow let me here what you have done??

i would love to hear you!

KnightofBuddha

I'll start posting some more around here soon. Look for 'Knight's Poetry' in a few days where I will have some newer poems.

I'm quite flattered at the compliments by the way!