Howdy, Stranger!

It looks like you're new here. If you want to get involved, click one of these buttons!

Examples: Monday, today, last week, Mar 26, 3/26/04
Welcome home! Please contact lincoln@icrontic.com if you have any difficulty logging in or using the site. New registrations must be manually approved which may take several days. Can't log in? Try clearing your browser's cookies.

Poet's Corner

federicafederica Seeker of the clear blue sky...Its better to remain silent and be thought a fool, than to speak out and remove all doubt Moderator
edited May 2006 in General Banter
Post or transfer all poetry to in here....
All work must be your own and original....
Read, Contribute and enjoy!

Comments

  • edited December 2005
    I AM YOU

    I can see you.
    I can hear you.
    I know you.
    I own you.
    I control you.
    I AM YOU

    I am a spider crawling inside you;
    You are a puppet,
    I am your master;
    You are my pet.
    Answer to my command!

    You cannot run.
    You cannot hide.
    I’ll chase you,
    I’ll find you!
    I’m like a shadow;
    I’ll follow you.

    You can’t escape.

    I’m invisible,
    Undetectable,
    INDESTRUCTABLE!

    I only die if you die.
    SO DON’T EVEN TRY!

    You are a puppet,
    I am your master.

    I am your thoughts
    Your memories,
    Your spirit,
    Your conscience;
    I AM YOU!

    I’m like your shadow.
    I follow you.
    Everywhere you go.

    I know what you’re thinking.
    I know your emotions.
    I AM YOUR EMOTIONS!
    I am love. I am hate.
    I am sadness.
    I am loneliness.
    I am anger.
    I am jealousy.
    I am guilt.
    I am evil.

    You are my puppet,
    I am your master.
    I’m like a shadow.

    I’m a thousand knifes
    Piercing your brain.

    I’m a face,
    Staring at you.

    I’m your past;
    I’m your present;
    I’m your future.

    I AM YOU.

    I’m a messenger.
    I’m a God.
    I’m a devil.
    I’m a monster.
    I’m a master.
    I’M YOUR MASTER!

    I know what you’re thinking.
    I can hear what you’re saying.
    I know you.
    I am you.

    I’m with you.
    Wherever you go.
    Like a shadow.
    Like a devil.

    I’m just a fly on the wall.

    You can’t see me.
    You can’t hear me.
    YOU CAN’T KILL ME!

    I’m invisible;
    I’m undetectable;
    INDESTRUCTABLE!

    I’m a camera.
    Taking pictures.
    OF YOU!

    I’m a microphone.
    Listening.
    TO YOU!

    I know you.

    I control you.

    I AM YOU!

    And there’s nothing you can do about it!

    SO BE AFRAID!

    Because I’m not a nice guy…
  • edited December 2005
    A ballad (poem that tells a story) about The Buddha. Not my best work, but relevent to this site. Please leave feedback.
    Siddhartha Gautama

    I’m going to tell you a story,
    The story of a Prince.
    He did amazing things in his life,
    And been remembered for them since.

    One day he left his palace,
    About the age of thirty.
    Round and around the town he walked,
    There he saw plenty:

    He saw a baby being born,
    He saw a man on a walking stick,
    He saw a dying woman by the road,
    And an old person, very sick.

    When he saw these four things,
    He was unhappy with his life,
    So he left Nepal and his dad,
    To escape the trouble and the strife.

    He searched for the meaning of life,
    He walked for miles and miles,
    Fasted for months and months,
    And tested his life in trials.

    One day in the north of India,
    He meditated under a tree.
    And then he had a vision,
    Thus his soul was set free.

    That day he was happy,
    Happier than he’d ever been.
    So he set about teaching,
    To free the world from sin.

    People listened to his teachings,
    With great anticipation,
    They told their friends and soon,
    He was known throughout the nation.

    And now throughout the world,
    People know of him.
    And his teachings are now practiced,
    In the form of Buddhism.
  • edited December 2005
    Another one of my poems I wrote in an English class, this is a sonnet, so some of the lines are a bit.. iffy. For those who do not know a sonnet is a poem that must have 14 lines in the rhyme scheme a,b,a,b,c,d,c,d,e,f,e,f,g,g. Each line must have 10 syllabals in iambic pentameter and it must be about love. They're ver difficult to write! This one is based on William Shakespeare's "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?" Any feedback, critical or complimentry is welcome.
    Love’s Spite

    Shall I compare thee to a rainy day?
    Thou art more ugly and more desolate.
    You’re rough winds that shake the sly buds of May.
    And you’ve been with me all too long a date.
    Sometimes too much hatred your black heart pumps.
    And often is your gold face deceiving,
    And when your round blue eyes become cold bumps,
    I always be most certainly leaving;
    But thy eternal rain will and shall fade,
    And lose possession ‘cos to be you owe;
    May death be you so you can lie in shade,
    When in my English room thou shall now grow,
    So long as men can breathe and eyes can see,
    So long lives this, and spreads my hate to thee.
  • edited December 2005
    Who am I
    To put my name
    On a poem?

    I'm only a pair of eyes
    Behind wet glass
    In the rain
  • buddhafootbuddhafoot Veteran
    edited December 2005
    White falls in the night.
    A blanket of frozen cold
    Winter grips the dark.

    Loved ones and cocoa
    Windows and a bright fire
    It's warm in my heart.

    ==================

    haiku! oh!, bless you.
    i thought that you were sneezing
    need a zen hanky?

    -bf
  • angulimalaangulimala Veteran
    edited December 2005
    to st sangha,
    i bow to you o god of poetry,you are a poet and you are a prophet(i quote this from 'red hot chilly peppers' song lyrics)
  • edited December 2005
    Oh, thank you angulimala! I've got writers block at the moment.

    I have another poem that I am quite fond of, however I have not posted it here because I feel it is inappropriate. It is entitled The Torturers
  • SimonthepilgrimSimonthepilgrim Veteran
    edited December 2005
    May I join in?

    This is one that I have never shared elsewhere. I don't know why. I wrote it one afternoon, in Oxfordshire, towards the end of a day of writing poetry with a group of other poets. We used to meet, once a month, for a day, to write. We met for years and those first Saturdays of every month (I barely missed one) were wonderful.

    The format of the day was always the same: we all met together and did some warm-up writing, games and so on. We would choose a theme for the day or continue what we had done the previous month and start to play with it. We would go for a walk, either alone or together, with some object in view or to allow something to arise (the old farmhouse was about 200 yds from a sewage works, right in the heart of the Oxfordshire hills). In the afternoon, after a great lunch: soup, bread, cheese, fruit crumble, we would work alone: the house and garden provided lots a little nooks and crannies in which to write. Then, finally, we would meet to share what we had been doing.

    I wrote it at a time (1996) when gardening had become a passion for me. I had recovered finally from bypass surgery 8 months earlier and I was noticing the oncoming Spring. At the same time, London was under major terrorist attack by the IRA: the Canary Wharf bomb in February and the Aldwych bomb only a few days earlier. I had to find a way to make sense of the contrast between senseless, technological slaughter and the vital exuberance of Spring growth.

    BLUE HYDRANGEAS


    Sing a song of shrapnel
    A pocket full of blight
    Regiments of soldiers
    Hidden out of sight.

    When the war is raging
    Metal from the skies
    Falls on field and garden
    To rot and oxydise.

    When the war is over
    Iron in the beds
    Adds its lovely colour
    To silent flower heads.

  • buddhafootbuddhafoot Veteran
    edited December 2005
    Hmmm....

    At first, I went, "Huh!?!?!"

    Then I looked at the name of the author - and it all made sense.

    Nice poem, Simon.

    -bf
  • SimonthepilgrimSimonthepilgrim Veteran
    edited December 2005
    buddhafoot wrote:
    Hmmm....

    At first, I went, "Huh!?!?!"

    Then I looked at the name of the author - and it all made sense.

    Nice poem, Simon.

    -bf

    Not sure how to take that, BF. We were always taught that "nice" was only to be used to mean "precise"!
  • buddhafootbuddhafoot Veteran
    edited December 2005
    "Nice" as in interesting, amusing, thought provoking because of the initial view and the result of the end - and because it was

    S-C-R-U-M-P-D-I-L-Y-I-C-I-O-U-S!

    -bf
  • edited December 2005
    ;) That's a nice distinction. And Simon, thank you for that poem.
  • Argon.AidArgon.Aid Veteran
    edited December 2005
    Hey,Heres a classic that malays should know.

    Dua Tiga kucing berlari,
    Mana Nak sama si Kucing belang.
    Dua Tiga bolehku cari.
    Yang satu lagi sendiri ia pulang.

    And another that I shall make up.

    There once was this boy,
    Deluded and lost.
    His world was his toy.
    He thought everything was his.

    There was one day,
    He met this friend.
    One that would make his day,
    To finally make him awake.

    Thus he awoke from his slumber,
    Needless of food for hunger.
    He no longer when astray.
    Always here,never away.

    And one for the forum,

    Tis the New Buddhist Forum,
    Home to all,
    To discuss and talk,
    Plus to be merry and awed.

    There's Brian,
    The leader,the owner.
    Always like a lion,
    He prowls every corner.

    Now there is Federica,
    Cheerful like the sun.
    Motherly till the end.
    Always there to make everything right.

    Now lets not forget Simon,
    The master of words,
    One whose knowledge,
    To be awed and respected.

    Buddhafoots here too!
    A fantastic singer,
    Another proud member.
    To bring us joy and laughter.

    Of course there are others.
    For without them,
    This would be nothing.
    Not a home,not even a camp.

    Thank you everyone for these forum and Brian!Sorry if the poem is not that high class.I tried my best:tongue2:

    "May your faith in your religion remain unwavering"
    -Ar.Aid
  • edited December 2005
    I didn't write this myself but I think it's cool:

    Online friends are people we may never meet.... We see pictures, we see cams...It isn't the same.... We grow close...We care and love one another.... One day we may not hear from one another.... Our hearts will break... All we see is a name on messenger but the person we don't see anymore..... We pray....."Please come back
  • edited December 2005
    Here are some lyrics that I wrote in my pre-Shakyamuni days (going through a difficult time).

    Some day,
    This time wil come around.
    And I'll say,
    It was a lot of fun but not right now...


    [chorus] - So I close my eyes,
    And listen to the Sound of the Sun.

    So I close my eyes,
    And listen to the Sound of the Sun.

    I'll try,
    To spend much time in the sky.
    And I'll fight,
    To keep the blue pools from pulling me down.

    [chorus]

    Tonight,
    The walls will come crashing down.
    And it's my right,
    To make the call and let the demons out...

    [chorus]
  • edited December 2005
    It's a bit teenage innit!
  • SimonthepilgrimSimonthepilgrim Veteran
    edited December 2005
    It's a bit teenage innit!

    And all the better for it, BSF!
  • edited December 2005
    And all the better for it, BSF!

    Nothing like a bit of angst in the morning!
  • buddhafootbuddhafoot Veteran
    edited December 2005
    Here's a song I did in a very ugly period of my life...

    Quiet nights are filled with dreams
    I find I can't recall
    So I talk with my old friends
    These bleak and silent walls.
    A sighing wind stirs upon my
    Dark and weary mind
    To touch the sheets and be the only
    Solice I can find.

    And though I rise, it's no surprise, it's just another day

    Skies of grey are all I seem to
    Wake to anymore
    Not a soul stirring in the stillness
    Of the morn
    Ignore the pain that leaves me lying
    Cold and sore
    It's a wonder I can even stand
    To find the door.

    And though I rise it's no surprise, it's just another day

    [c]
    I don't want to wake up to
    Another day
    That seems just like today

    I take the same old tired walk
    The same old tired day
    I take the same old tired drive
    The same old tired way
    And as I lay me down to sleep
    Inside the settling night
    I hug the sheets and dream the lie
    Of what seemed oh, so right.

    And it's no surprise, I could close my eye
    And miss another day

    -bf
  • edited January 2006
    ok so, this is a lot different from my other works, but i'll put it out here and im always open to your thoughts about my work.

    i was not a son of privilege
    and i never wore new fashion
    i developed words for passion
    and an end to suffering.
    i have seen my next door
    neighbors as they huddled in
    the street
    when we went from night to day
    without a soul to feed.
    jesus christ wept for us
    and buddha wiped us clean
    and shiva was the false idol
    before moses was on the scene.
    a call to prayer is daily
    for those deemed obscene
    while preachers pockets get fatter
    and the follower's are lean.
    our karma deems us bad or good
    with each breath we take
    but what about the soldiers
    who nailed god to a stake?
    what about the world at large
    do we all just lie in wait?
    what about the ones in charge
    and those shattered in the wake
    "this world is not", he said,
    "emotions are all fake."
    tell that to the lovers or
    the gun in the desperate man's face.
    when the sky falls away
    will you come back or will
    you stay?
    i guess it all depends if
    today would be a better yesterday.
  • edited January 2006
    I was really touched when I read this. It is written by the infamous Maj (see the: "I'm so embarrassed!" thread) and it's about a site that I use to be an admin of, but I left. It has some very funny lines in it (though nobody here will uinderstand as they're about other members) but I was really touched by it so I thought I'd share it:

    Professor Piggy:
    You know that we miss you
    You know we want you back
    If you don't return
    Rosie'll give you a whack
    PyroZ is dictating us all
    Nocus is insane
    If you don't rule the boards soon
    Trust me, I'll complain
    PawPaw is pestering
    Titans Tower is grieving
    Emma has confetti
    And we have been weeping!
    And of course there is Eve
    She misses you too!
    Truth of the matter is
    We all do!
    Without you here
    The place isn't so groovy
    Without you here
    Things don't run as smoothly
    Without you here
    Point Count has stopped
    Without you here
    Challenges have flopped
    Without you here
    The place isn't the same
    Without you here
    I'll go insane
    We need you here
    Is what we're trying to say
    So say you'll come back again
    Please say you'll stay!
  • edited February 2006
    These are some poems I wrote a few years ago while playing around with poetry magnets:

    Expression

    Abstract expressions
    of psychedelic proportions
    exude opaque symbols
    and primary templates
    Aesthetic postures
    silhouetted in monumental space
    The palette, the canvas, the screen
    Behold the illusion of the surreal.

    Impressions

    Recorded impressions
    create and imitate
    avant-garde views
    Imagine and reflect,
    expose and reveal
    The bold stylized symmetry
    of the absurd masterpiece.

    Melody

    Image and shape
    shimmer and light
    essence expressed as harmony
    illustrates and captures
    dazzling unity,
    manifesting grace
    that will soon
    give way to
    beautiful melody.

    Film Icons

    Film icons
    portray and fabricate
    figures pointing
    to the interior collage
    Behold and imagine
    colors and pictures
    resonating satire and illusion
    Inspire and create
    the concrete sculpture of the self.

    Goddess

    The cool mist of winter
    shines through in spring
    Classical expressions
    silhouetted in purple,
    whispering beneath the void
    There appears a goddess
    dressed in stardust
    to inspire the essential language
    of the reflective moon.

    Ballet

    Beauty and grace
    poetry in motion
    the stylized movements
    of the ballet performance
    expose and unveil
    the delirious language of the soul.

    Truth Obscured

    They say the solution is imminent
    above thoughts in time and space
    Curious questions abound
    nothing is as it seems
    A voice from within
    beckons softly,
    calling forth subtle memories
    of times gone past
    Things forgotten, never missed
    Clever ideas pierce the opaque veil
    juxtaposing sound and light,
    revealing truth obscured.

  • edited February 2006
    And this is a poem I wrote last November when I broke up with my boyfriend:

    Farewell, My Love

    Thoughts of you
    spin around in my head
    I feel your absence
    as my heart yearns for you
    It knows where it belongs
    With you, my love ... with you.

    Yet that is not possible
    Our circumstances will not allow it
    A love so very beautiful and free
    is no longer allowed to express itself
    It has been held back
    against it's wishes and desires,
    no longer free to lead,
    held captive and smothered
    underneath fear's crushing weight.

    Alas, it is time to bid farewell
    There is nothing left that can live
    We must move on,
    confident that we will find
    true love in another's embrace.

    All is not lost, love will survive
    It always finds a way
    When one door closes,
    another door opens and draws us in
    to the love that we so longingly seek.

    Farewell, my love ... my darling
    It is time to bid you adieu
    You will forever reside in my heart
    through the ages and for all eternity
    Farewell, my love ... farewell.

  • XraymanXrayman Veteran
    edited February 2006
    HOLY CR**! you people blew me away! all of you! what the hell are you people doing here? for (insert religous icon/god)'s sake, start writing!

    I think i'd better redo the last four years of my Writer's Course..I'm Sh**.

    regards,
    Richard.

    P.S. thanks for depressing me.
  • SimonthepilgrimSimonthepilgrim Veteran
    edited February 2006
    Tomorrow, I go into hospital for angioplasty. I am posting about this in the Lotus Lounge but here is a poem that I wrote, a decade ago, two days before my multiple bypass operation:

    FOR CHRIS
    Written on my 52nd birthday


    The evening primroses are flowering
    in sun-rise yellow.
    The tiger lily buds begin
    to warm.
    We've picked our first crop
    of secret,
    home-grown,
    all neglected
    strawberries.

    My oldest friend
    and my best love
    are both with me.

    And you and I watch the light
    reflect like steel
    on Severn from the hill.

    In two days time,
    a moment when
    'they' stop my heart

    And,
    fifty two years in,
    it feels
    good
    to be alive.

    (4/7/95)
  • edited February 2006
    Tomorrow, I go into hospital for angioplasty.

    OMG, Simon! I will be certain to send you healing energy and good thoughts. flower0dn.gifhug.gif

    Oh, and I love your poetry!! clapping2xu.gif
  • edited February 2006
    beatnik5ga.gif
  • buddhafootbuddhafoot Veteran
    edited February 2006
    Simon - I am and will be thinking of you.

    Drop us a line as soon as you are able.

    -bf
  • edited February 2006
    This is a very basic poem that I just dreamt up, I thought it had impact, but everyone who I tell just looks at me as if I am from another planet....

    Always
    I am yours
    Today
    Tommorow
    Now
    Always

    You are mine
    Today
    Tommorow
    Now
    Always

    We are one another
    Today
    Tommorow
    Now
    Always

    Just remember
    Today
    Tommorow
    Now
    Always

    Always....
  • federicafederica Seeker of the clear blue sky... Its better to remain silent and be thought a fool, than to speak out and remove all doubt Moderator
    edited February 2006
    ....Welcome to our planet, Spaceboy....:grin:
  • edited March 2006
    There's a good foot of snow in the valley today
    Every pine wears a white furry coat
    The stream is in spate as it chuckles and leaps
    And it all brings a lump to my throat.

    As I stand and I stare at the beauty around
    Tomorrow a memory past
    I graps the impermancence, fragile and light
    Nothing, but nothing can last.
  • edited March 2006
    I have amazing powers!
    I get good tables at restaurants.
    I haven't stubbed a toe in twelve years.
    I can destroy the universe with a thought.

    - Jed McKenna
  • edited March 2006
    Spring

    Maple sap rising,
    Old woman wakes and streches arm
    hard trees crack and shake.
  • XraymanXrayman Veteran
    edited March 2006
    Age

    caffeine addiction
    man cracking old knuckles, snap!
    arthritic best friend


    Such positive thoughts on the subject, Don't you think? teehee
  • XraymanXrayman Veteran
    edited March 2006
    I posted to Buddhism 202, but I Found what I've been looking for !

    The revolution will no be televised
    You will not be able to stay home, brother.
    You will not be able to plug in, turn on and cop out.
    You will not be able to lose yourself on skag and skip,
    Skip out for beer during commercials,
    Because the revolution will not be televised.

    The revolution will not be televised.
    The revolution will not be brought to you by Xerox
    In 4 parts without commercial interruptions.
    The revolution will not show you pictures of Nixon
    blowing a bugle and leading a charge by John
    Mitchell, General Abrams and Spiro Agnew to eat
    hog maws confiscated from a Harlem sanctuary.

    The revolution will not be televised.
    The revolution will not be brought to you by the
    Schaefer Award Theatre and will not star Natalie
    Woods and Steve McQueen or Bullwinkle and Julia.
    The revolution will not give your mouth sex appeal.
    The revolution will not get rid of the nubs.
    The revolution will not make you look five pounds
    thinner, because the revolution will not be televised, Brother.

    There will be no pictures of you and Willie May
    pushing that shopping cart down the block on the dead run,
    or trying to slide that color television into a stolen ambulance.
    NBC will not be able predict the winner at 8:32
    or report from 29 districts.
    The revolution will not be televised.

    There will be no pictures of pigs shooting down
    brothers in the instant replay.
    There will be no pictures of pigs shooting down
    brothers in the instant replay.
    There will be no pictures of Whitney Young being
    run out of Harlem on a rail with a brand new process.
    There will be no slow motion or still life of Roy
    Wilkens strolling through Watts in a Red, Black and
    Green liberation jumpsuit that he had been saving
    For just the proper occasion.

    Green Acres, The Beverly Hillbillies, and Hooterville
    Junction will no longer be so damned relevant, and
    women will not care if Dick finally gets down with
    Jane on Search for Tomorrow because Black people
    will be in the street looking for a brighter day.
    The revolution will not be televised.

    There will be no highlights on the eleven o'clock
    news and no pictures of hairy armed women
    liberationists and Jackie Onassis blowing her nose.
    The theme song will not be written by Jim Webb,
    Francis Scott Key, nor sung by Glen Campbell, Tom
    Jones, Johnny Cash, Englebert Humperdink, or the Rare Earth.
    The revolution will not be televised.

    The revolution will not be right back
    after a message about a white tornado, white lightning, or white people.
    You will not have to worry about a dove in your
    bedroom, a tiger in your tank, or the giant in your toilet bowl.
    The revolution will not go better with Coke.
    The revolution will not fight the germs that may cause bad breath.
    The revolution will put you in the driver's seat.

    The revolution will not be televised, will not be televised,
    will not be televised, will not be televised.
    The revolution will be no re-run brothers;
    The revolution will be live.
  • edited April 2006
    i close my eyes
    to see
    the whizzing
    vastness of
    the great energies
    of my surroundings.

    if mind is
    emptiness,
    what am i
    trying to
    empty my
    mind
    of?
  • edited May 2006
    Sorry to bump this thread, but was listening to my ambient, and became inspired by a dream I had last night about a girl I was close friends with.

    Exultation

    In the light of the morning sun
    Her hair flows in the cool breeze
    Her eys stare at me like precious stones in a desolate land
    Her dress flails in the wind, her smooth sand colored skin dry from the night before

    I stand before her, my emotions flowing endlessly through me
    The feeling of water, when there is no oasis overwhelms me
    Feeling unworthy of such a fair maiden

    She speaks to me, yet I do not hear
    Our spirits walking hand in hand in a world we do not see
    Her warm, ambient words dissipate the cold breeze

    Outside the window, the earth's warm embrace open to her
    I look, yet I do not see
    I speak, yet I make no sound
    My spirit displays the reborn world in my eyes

    I reach, but do not feel, for she is not meant for my touch

    We lay in the desert sands, the earth our guardian
    Where there is no savior from the sun, we feel water over our bodies
    My spirit speaks to me, comforts me in my sadness

    The sun shines ever so brightly, the water fills me
    The sun warms my eyes, the light growing brighter
    She slowly starts to speak, her words clearer
    I am again able to hear, I am able to see

    Her gentle touch draws our spirits nearer
    I once again feel, I am able to speak
    With my words, our spirits once again walk hand in hand
    With our words, our spirits embrace, united for eternity
Sign In or Register to comment.